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The stretched out

by: panopticpants

Fri Dec 04, 2009 at 03:03:31 AM MST

The stretched out

to never look at feet
in the same way again -
"evening," dimly lifts
the crackly feet of sum,
strange animals
straighten backs or
a spokey bike crush,
portlandly scuffed up leg.
We Insects walk
and scale these petals
that may seem
an irritant

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The stretched out (0.00 / 0)

Was this foe the animals or mainly insects?. I think there is a deep meaning to this mini poem. Or what should I call it?

by: techychic @ Sat Dec 05, 2009 at 07:59:27 AM UTC

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call it anything! i'd hope it was a poem but if it works as TP then also functional in a different way. it's not for either animals or insects. we are earthlings.

by: panopticpants @ Mon Dec 14, 2009 at 07:25:37 AM UTC